Walking
Dead
The date is July 15th,
2011 and it’s almost midnight. Suddenly Ryan wakes up from a loud noise from
the barn. He wakes up his brother Kyle and tells him about the loud noise. I
think there is someone in the barn Ryan says to Kyle. They decide to go to the barn
and see what the noise was. When they get to the barn they see that the door
has been opened. Did dad forget to lock the door asked Kyle? No dad always locks the door said Ryan. They
enter the barn. Suddenly Ryan screams
and they both look over and see that something has killed and eaten their
horses. What the hell could have done this said Kyle? They both started looking
threw the barn trying to find what had killed there horses. When they got to
the other side of the barn they found one horse that was still alive but they
could tell that something has bitten a huge chunk out of it. Ryan noticed that
its eyes were blood shot red. It didn’t look normal and was in a lot of pain.
After awhile of searching the barn
they found nothing. Then all of a sudden Ryan said shhhh. What Said Kyle? I
hear something outside. So they decided to go check behind the barn. Ryan
grabbed a flash light and a shotgun that there dad always kept in the barn. Are
you going to shoot it said Kyle? Look what it did to the horses Kyle, said
Ryan. Whatever it is if it can do that to a horse than it can definitely to it
to us so I’m bringing it just in case.
Ok said Kyle in a worried voice. They got to the back of the barn and
couldn’t really see anything because it was so dark and there was no light
behind the barn. Then Kyle pointed and said I see something. So they both ran
towards it. Where did it go said Ryan? Near the truck yelled Kyle! When they
got to the truck they realized it wasn’t something, it was someone! What are
you doing here, said Ryan. Did you kill our horses? The man didn’t respond.
They kept trying to talk to the man
but he would not answer. Ryan got so mad that he grabbed the man and threw him
over to his side and started screaming at him. Then the man got up and turned
around. His face was covered in blood and his eyes were blood shot just like
the horse. Suddenly he started running
at Ryan and Kyle. They both started running towards the house to get there dad.
But the man was right behind them chasing after them. Then Ryan did the
unthinkable and turned around and shot the man in the leg with the shotgun that
he had got from the barn. It blew the man’s leg of and he fell. Kyle looked at
Ryan. Why the hell did you shoot him asked Kyle? Ryan just stared at the man on
the ground not even saying a word.
Then right when Ryan was going to
say something the man started crawling towards Ryan and Kyle. The man grabbed
Ryan’s leg and tried to bite him but Ryan kicked him in the head. This man
isn’t human said Ryan. He’s like a zombie or something like that, said Kyle.
Then Jeff who is their dad whipped open the front door with his rifle in his
hand and yelled, what is going on I heard a gunshot go off. Kyle just pointed
at the sick blood covered creator that was still trying to have Ryan for lunch.
Jeff ran towards the man trying to help him up but Ryan grabbed him before he
got to him. Don’t touch him said Ryan. What did you do to this man asked Jeff?
He’s not a man said Kyle. He’s a zombie.
About 30 minutes later Jeff, Kyle and
Ryan were inside the house. They decided to lock the creator up in the barn.
They tried calling 911 but no one was answering the phone. Ryan turned on the
TV to see if anything was in the news. When he turned on TV the first thing
that it said was breaking news. The news was saying man eating creators were
infecting the city and that they were spreading the disease by biting people.
They were saying that the only way to kill these creators were to shoot them in
the head and that if you see any of these creators you should kill them right
away. They were saying that you should take shelter and stay at home and do not
go outside. All of a sudden Ryan grabbed the gun and ran out the door towards
the barn. When he got to the barn he unlocked the barn door and ran inside the
barn. The zombie was still there eating the horse that was still alive. The
horse didn’t even react to the zombie biting him. It was like the horse was a
zombie too. So Ryan put the gun to the zombies head and pulled the trigger. The
shot blew the zombies head off. Blood splattered everywhere. Then Kyle and Jeff
ran into the barn and just looked at the dead zombie. Ryan was expecting Kyle
and Jeff to freak out but they just started laughing. Holy crap, said Jeff. You
blew his head off.
It’s been about a month. The date
is August 17 and they haven’t left the house at all unless they needed to grab
leftover food from the barn. They are almost out of food and the disease has
gotten out of control. Ryan and Kyle know that they were told to stay home and
not leave by the news they have no choice. They have to search for food. They
decided to stock up on weapons to bring with them. They bring their shotgun
rifle and two handguns and two AK 47s and all the ammunition they could carry.
Jeff decided to stay home and watch and protect the house. They both walk out
the door and look back a Jeff and say goodbye. Good luck, said Jeff.
It’s now been two days since they
left their house and they are now in the city. Everything has been destroyed
and there is no sign of anybody living or dead. They have found little food but
enough to still go on. About an hour of walking the city streets and they are
no tired and extremely hungry. Suddenly a woman comes running out of a building
screaming. Then three zombies come running out right behind her. Ryan and Kyle
both took out their hand guns and start shooting. All three were shot in the head and killed.
Thank you said the women. No problem, said Ryan and Kyle. Are you ok? Yea I’m fine said the women in a worried voice.
Kyle notices that the woman was holding her arm. What’s wrong with your arm
said Kyle to the women. Nothing said, the women. Then why is there blood
dripping from your hand. Ryan and Kyle both knew that she had been bitten. I
know what happens after you have been bitten, said the women. Then suddenly she
grabbed Kyle’s hand gun and shot herself in the head. They were both surprised
but they both knew at one point they would of have to of done it them selves.
Kyle went to go pick up his hand gun wiping the blood from the women of his gun
using her shirt. What are you doing, said Ryan to Kyle. What? It’s her blood
not mine. I’m not going to ruin my shirt. Anyways she’s dead now, what does she
care. Ummm yea I guess you’re right, I’m pretty sure a clean shirt is the least
of her problems right now, said Ryan
One day latter and they still
haven’t found food. But then Ryan notices that there is a prison up the street
that he could notice that there were candles lit on top of the building and a
sign that said food, protection and shelter. When they got there they were
greeted by two men. They let them inside the prison, but first they were
searched to make sure they weren’t bitten or anything like that. When they
entered the prison they saw that there were six men and three women. All of
them were well armed with weapons and grenades and all that good stuff that you
could use to kill zombies. After they were all done introducing them selves to
Ryan and Kyle and they told there story on how they got there and how they took
over the prison, Ryan and Kyle both explained why they were wondering around
the city streets and how they were looking for food and that they had left
their dad back at home to protect the house. They both were assigned prison
cells to sleep in. they both needed sleep because they were so exhausted so
after a good size meal they were off to bed.
It’s been about seven hours since
they have fallen asleep when suddenly thy both wake up to gun shots going off.
They both grabbed there new guns that they were given and ran down stairs.
There were zombies everywhere. They had somehow broken in and were now running
around everywhere. They both started shooting but there was too many. Ryan and
Kyle along with the others started heading up towards the roof. There were
bullets flying everywhere. Then all of a sudden one of the guys threw a grenade
down the stair well and with a big explosion, the zombies all went flying. Not
all gave up though. Some were still crawling up the stairs even with there legs
blown off. There were still too many zombies and now they were cornered on top
of the roof with nowhere to go. When suddenly a helicopter came up and just
started spraying bullets everywhere. Then the helicopter landed and everybody
started boarding the helicopter as fast as they could because zombies were
still running at them. Then the helicopter took off and was on its way when
Ryan and Kyle looked to see who else was in the helicopter and saw that their
dad was aboard to. How did you get here, said Ryan and Kyle? I found flares in
the basement and set them off in the yard and soon enough they showed up and I told
them about you guys and what way you guys started walking. So where are we
going now because I’m guessing were not going back home, said Kyle. Well were
going to Los Angeles. Why are we going there?
Because there is no infection there, said Jeff. By the time they got there they realize that
was no longer the case. The city was destroyed and the infection was horrible. There
were zombies everywhere and they knew once they landed they were going to be in
the fight for their lives.
1.the conflict of the story was when the boys have to leave their father and their safe house to go and find food and weapons.
ReplyDelete2.the way he characters change over the coarse of the story and how they go into this whole thing not being afraid at all whatsoever
3.my favorite part of the story was when the guys were fighting all of the zombies after they had woken up.
4.the story's best feature is the resolution and how their father just came out of nowhere and rescued them.
5.the story's theme i think is that when you work together in numbers you get work done faster and better
6.all i think you need to revise is your spelling i would just copy and paste it to word and go from there i liked it a lot.
1. The conflict is when they need to find food and weapons
ReplyDelete2.He changes because he becomes not afraid
3. my favorite part was when they found the prison “One day latter and they still haven’t found food. But then Ryan notices that there is a prison up the street that he could notice that there were candles lit on top of the building and a sign that said food, protection and shelter.”
4.The best feature of the story to me was the climax when they were fighting zombies
5.I think the theme is family is big and you should protect them
6.I think you just need to revise the punctuation like you should add some more commas and these ""
i think the story was good but maybe it would of been better if they ended up in the prison and no zombie infestation came.
ReplyDeletethe main characters deffinatley stayed the same, they were dedicated to survival no matter what the cost was.
My favorite part of the story is when the lady blows her head off and the two boys were standing in shock.
the best quality of the story is how close the family was.
the theme is deffinatley survival
a few spelling errors